Today it's my Dads 40 birthday so I choose to make a birthday dinner for him.On tonights Menu...
We have chicken kebabs with yellow pepper , cherry tomatos and bacon bits and cous cous to the side.
Dessert, we have banana cake with chocolate smoothed on the
top with cream to the side.
the microwave. My brother Jack and I started to make the kebabs. Then my family dishes up at ate.
Dessert
I had chosen to bake banana cake because it was dad favorite cake. Mixed and mashed up the ingredients into a bowl and then poured it into a cake tin and put it in the oven for 50 minutes and then we let the cake cool down and put candles on it and sang happy birthday to dad. HAPPY BIRTHDAY DAD !!!
Comments
* Dad 19/20 It was wicked,Well done.
*Mum 19/20 Good for a first time cooker.
*Jack 18/20 It was yummy.
They had to score for both meals.

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I think that you did a good job but you need to proof read it. I think that you have done a good thing for your dad and that it is nearly a year eight level. You were also missing the odd capital letter.